B.B forever

topic posted Wed, January 12, 2005 - 6:07 PM by  tina
this is a poem wrote to a friend of mine.. i lost him just before christmas...and i miss him very much


if u were still here
if u never left
i wouldnt feel fear
i wouldnt have these tears
my dreams they seem so real
your face so crystal clear
it is my happy ending
that can never be
i pray that u r safe
the pain is fading from my mind
my dreams of happy endings
are falling far behind
i dont kno where to turn
im lost inside myself
why cant u still be here
safe with our reach...
but i kno now that u r safe
ur wings now trimmed with gold
ur smiling down upon us
a feeling that i kno
sumtimes i pray ur still here
how i wish that u wernt gone
your wings r trimed with gold
u r the remembered one
i kno its a dream
ur face as clear as day
i kno its just a dream
i kno u couldnt stay
i hate that your not here
that you couldnt say goodbye
i hate how much we miss u
i hate how much we cry
i kno now that u r safe
i kno now that u r home
i kno now that u r safe
ill never let u go
posted by:
tina
  • Re: B.B forever

    Sun, October 14, 2007 - 7:34 PM
    I've read your other posts, and i notice that this is a subject that comes up a lot with you. I want to say i admire your courage and to thank you for being so personal and real. I am sorry for your loss


    for what its worth, this poem is very good. you can see the truth in the words, and thats not something that you can teach

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